RLA Mixed Practice Test 6

Question 1 of 20 · Grammar and usage: agreement, pronouns, verb tense, frequently confused words

Email: Spring Update for Garden Volunteers

From: Tomas Reyna, Volunteer Coordinator
To: Maple Street Community Garden volunteers
Subject: Spring update and volunteer schedule

Dear Volunteers,

(1) I hope you enjoyed the winter break. The garden committee has finalized it's budget for the coming season, and I am happy to share some good news with all of you.

(2) First, the city has approved our request for a second water line. Last year, volunteers carried buckets from the single spigot near the gate, which slowed down every watering shift. The new line will run along the back fence and will serve the twelve raised beds in that area.

(3) Second, we will start a composting program in May. At this point in time, due to the fact that we have more volunteers than ever before, we can finally staff a weekly compost shift. Volunteers on this shift will turn the piles, record the temperature, and add dry leaves when the mix becomes too wet.

(4) Third, our partnership with Lincoln Elementary School will continue. When Ms. Okafor met with Ms. Reyes, she agreed to donate 200 tomato and pepper seedlings from the school greenhouse. Students will visit the garden on three Saturdays to help plant them.

(5) Finally, a reminder about our shared tools. Several shovels and two wheelbarrows were left outside last fall, and the rain ruined the handles. Please return every tool to the shed at the end of your shift. The committee is gonna be super strict about this rule from now on, so please take it seriously.

(6) The volunteer sign-up sheet for April and May is now available on our website. Each shift lasts two hours, and no experience is needed. If you have never gardened before, an experienced volunteer will work alongside you until you feel comfortable.

(7) Thank you for everything you do. Our garden grew more than 1,500 pounds of produce for the Westside Food Pantry last year, and with your help, we can grow even more this season.

Sincerely,
Tomas Reyna

In paragraph 4, the email says: "When Ms. Okafor met with Ms. Reyes, she agreed to donate 200 tomato and pepper seedlings from the school greenhouse."

Which revision makes clear who agreed to donate the seedlings, without creating a new error?

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Who could she refer to? A good revision names one person and keeps every other part of the sentence correct.

Question 2 of 20 · Grammar and usage: agreement, pronouns, verb tense, frequently confused words

Email: Spring Update for Garden Volunteers

From: Tomas Reyna, Volunteer Coordinator
To: Maple Street Community Garden volunteers
Subject: Spring update and volunteer schedule

Dear Volunteers,

(1) I hope you enjoyed the winter break. The garden committee has finalized it's budget for the coming season, and I am happy to share some good news with all of you.

(2) First, the city has approved our request for a second water line. Last year, volunteers carried buckets from the single spigot near the gate, which slowed down every watering shift. The new line will run along the back fence and will serve the twelve raised beds in that area.

(3) Second, we will start a composting program in May. At this point in time, due to the fact that we have more volunteers than ever before, we can finally staff a weekly compost shift. Volunteers on this shift will turn the piles, record the temperature, and add dry leaves when the mix becomes too wet.

(4) Third, our partnership with Lincoln Elementary School will continue. When Ms. Okafor met with Ms. Reyes, she agreed to donate 200 tomato and pepper seedlings from the school greenhouse. Students will visit the garden on three Saturdays to help plant them.

(5) Finally, a reminder about our shared tools. Several shovels and two wheelbarrows were left outside last fall, and the rain ruined the handles. Please return every tool to the shed at the end of your shift. The committee is gonna be super strict about this rule from now on, so please take it seriously.

(6) The volunteer sign-up sheet for April and May is now available on our website. Each shift lasts two hours, and no experience is needed. If you have never gardened before, an experienced volunteer will work alongside you until you feel comfortable.

(7) Thank you for everything you do. Our garden grew more than 1,500 pounds of produce for the Westside Food Pantry last year, and with your help, we can grow even more this season.

Sincerely,
Tomas Reyna

In paragraph 1, the email says: "The garden committee has finalized it's budget for the coming season."

Which revision corrects the error?

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Hint

Expand any contraction into two words and see if the sentence still makes sense.

Question 3 of 20 · Main idea, details and summary

Memo: New Mileage Reimbursement Process

(1) To: All field staff, Brightwater Home Health
From: Denise Okafor, Finance Manager
Date: April 8
Subject: New process for mileage reimbursement starting May 1

Beginning May 1, Brightwater will use a new process for reimbursing the miles you drive between patient visits. This memo explains what is changing, what is staying the same and how to get help.

(2) Over the past year, the paper mileage log has caused real headaches. Logs were lost between offices, handwriting was sometimes hard to read, and each form had to be checked by hand. On average, staff waited about three weeks to be paid back. Several of you told us that this delay made it hard to cover gas costs, especially at the end of the month.

(3) Under the new process, you will record trips in the RouteLog app on your phone. The app uses your location to measure the distance between visits, so there is nothing to add up. Submit your trips by noon each Monday. Trips submitted on time will be paid in your next paycheck instead of weeks later.

(4) Some things are not changing. The reimbursement rate per mile stays the same. As before, the drive from your home to your first visit of the day and from your last visit back home is treated as a normal commute and is not reimbursed. Personal stops during the day should still be left off your record.

(5) We know that not everyone has a smartphone or wants to use one for work. Staff in that situation may borrow a company tablet from their branch office. We will also hold two paid training sessions, on April 22 at 8:00 a.m. and April 24 at 4:00 p.m., in the main conference room. Each session lasts about forty-five minutes.

(6) Paper logs will be accepted for trips through April 30 only. If you have questions, contact the finance office at extension 214. Thank you for your patience while we make this process faster and easier for everyone.

Why did Denise Okafor most likely send this memo to field staff?

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Read the subject line and the first paragraph. What does the writer want staff to know or do?

Question 4 of 20 · How events, people and ideas develop and interact

After the Water: How One Flood Rebuilt Millbrook

(1) Today, visitors to the small river town of Millbrook notice something odd about the houses on Water Street: most of them sit on tall concrete foundations, with five or six steps up to the front door. The steps are a reminder of the night in 1998 when the Pine River rose eleven feet in less than a day.

(2) Millbrook had flooded before, but never like that. For weeks, heavy spring rain had fallen on ground that was still frozen in the hills upstream. Because frozen soil cannot soak up water, nearly all of the rain ran straight into the river. On the night of April 14, the water topped the old earthen levee and poured into the lower part of town. More than two hundred homes were damaged, and the town's only grocery store was ruined.

(3) In the months that followed, the town faced a hard question: should people rebuild exactly as before? Many residents wanted to. Their families had lived on Water Street for generations, and rebuilding the same houses seemed like the fastest way to get life back to normal. But the town's insurance costs had soared, and engineers warned that a flood of similar size could happen again.

(4) The turning point came at a crowded town meeting that November. Ana Ruiz, a nurse whose house had filled with four feet of water, stood up and described carrying her elderly neighbor through the flood in the dark. "I don't want to do that again," she said. "And I don't want my kids to." Several people later said her story changed the mood in the room. By the end of the night, the council voted to study new building rules instead of simply rebuilding.

(5) The rules passed the following spring. Any new or rebuilt home in the flood zone had to sit at least three feet above the 1998 water line. Electrical boxes and furnaces had to be placed on upper floors. The town also used state and federal grants to buy out about forty of the lowest-lying properties. Those lots were turned into a riverside park designed to hold water during floods.

(6) The changes were not cheap or popular with everyone. Raising a house added thousands of dollars to the cost of rebuilding, and some families moved away rather than pay it. Yet the rules were tested in 2011, when the Pine River rose nearly as high as it had in 1998. This time, only a handful of homes reported serious damage, and the park filled with water exactly as planned. Within a few years, the town's flood insurance costs had begun to fall.

According to paragraph 2, why did so much rain run directly into the Pine River in 1998?

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Paragraph 2 uses the word because. Read that sentence closely.

Question 5 of 20 · Word meaning and tone in context

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Letter from the Maple Court Tenants' Association

(1) To: Greenline Property Management
From: Maple Court Tenants' Association
Re: Heating repairs in Building C

Dear Ms. Castillo,

On behalf of the Maple Court Tenants' Association, thank you for meeting with us in October and for the improvements your team has made this year. The new laundry machines and the repaired parking-lot lights have made a real difference, and residents have noticed.

(2) We are writing today, however, about a problem that can no longer wait. Since November 18, the heating system in Building C has failed on at least nine separate days. On several of those days, residents measured indoor temperatures below 60 degrees. Building C is home to fourteen children under the age of five and at least six residents over the age of seventy. For them, a cold apartment is not an inconvenience. It is a health risk.

(3) Each time the heat has failed, residents have followed the proper procedure: they have called the maintenance line and submitted written repair requests. Each time, a technician has restarted the boiler, and each time, it has failed again within days. We have now submitted more than thirty requests. Restarting the same boiler again and again is not a repair. It is a delay.

(4) We are therefore asking for three things. First, we ask that a licensed heating contractor inspect the Building C boiler within the next ten days and that the association receive a copy of the findings. Second, we ask that space heaters be provided immediately to any household that requests one until the system is reliable. Third, we ask for a written plan, with dates, for a permanent repair or replacement.

(5) We want to be clear: we would much rather solve this together than through the city's housing inspection office, and we believe that is possible. Your response to our concerns about the laundry room last spring showed that Greenline can act quickly when a problem is taken seriously. We are asking you to take this problem just as seriously.

(6) We would welcome a meeting at your earliest convenience and look forward to your reply by December 20.

Sincerely,
Darnell Foster, President
Maple Court Tenants' Association

Select all of the phrases that help create a firm, urgent tone in the letter.

Select all that apply.

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Hint

Look in paragraphs 2–3 for phrases that insist the problem is serious or that the current response is not good enough. Skip polite or appreciative phrases.

Question 6 of 20 · Author's purpose and point of view

Plan for Warehouse Divides Millbrook

(1) A proposal to build a large distribution warehouse on the edge of Millbrook has drawn strong reactions from residents, with some welcoming the promise of new jobs and others warning of heavy truck traffic.

(2) Brightpath Logistics, a shipping company based in Ohio, wants to build a 600,000-square-foot warehouse on 80 acres of farmland along Route 9. According to the company's application, the warehouse would employ about 450 full-time workers and operate twenty-four hours a day. The site is about one mile from Millbrook Elementary School.

(3) Company spokesperson Alan Reyes said the project would bring "steady jobs with benefits" to a town where the largest employer, a paper mill, closed in 2019. Brightpath says starting pay would be $19 an hour. "We want to be a good neighbor," Reyes said. "We will plant trees along Route 9 and pay for a new traffic light."

(4) Not everyone is convinced. Linda Marsh, who has lived on Route 9 for thirty years, said she worries about safety. A traffic study submitted with the application estimates that the warehouse would bring about 300 truck trips per day. "My grandkids wait for the school bus right there," Marsh said. "I can't imagine three hundred trucks going by them."

(5) Others see the warehouse as a lifeline. Darnell Fisher, who lost his job when the paper mill closed, now drives forty minutes each way to work at a factory in another county. "If I could work ten minutes from home, I'd get an hour of my life back every day," he said.

(6) Some residents raised other questions at a public meeting last week, including whether the town's water system could handle the building and what would happen to nearby property values. Town engineer Kim Osei said those questions are being studied and that a report is expected by early December.

(7) The town Planning Board will vote on the proposal at its December 16 meeting at Town Hall. Residents may submit written comments to the board until December 9.

Why did the reporter most likely write this article?

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Does the article ask readers to do something, or mainly tell them what is happening?

Question 7 of 20 · Inferences and conclusions

Employee Tuition Assistance Policy

Northgate Regional Hospital: Employee Handbook, Section 7.4 Tuition Assistance Policy

(1) Purpose. Northgate Regional Hospital supports employees who want to build their skills and advance their careers. Under this policy, the hospital will reimburse eligible employees for part of the cost of approved courses.

(2) Eligibility. To qualify, an employee must (a) be scheduled to work at least 24 hours per week, (b) have completed 6 months of continuous employment by the course start date, and (c) be in good standing, meaning the employee has received no written warning in the past 12 months.

(3) Approved courses. Courses must be taken at an accredited college, university, or technical school, and must relate to the employee's current job or to a position the employee could reasonably move into at Northgate. Examples include nursing, medical coding, health information technology, and supervisory management. GED preparation and English-language classes are approved for any eligible employee, whatever his or her job. Courses taken only for personal interest, such as photography or cooking, are not eligible.

(4) Amount. The hospital will reimburse 75 percent of tuition, up to $3,000 per calendar year. Books, parking, and lab fees are not covered.

(5) How to apply. Submit a Tuition Request Form to Human Resources at least 30 days before the course begins. Requests submitted late will not be approved. Human Resources will respond to each request within 10 business days. After you finish the course, submit your grade report and tuition receipt within 60 days. Reimbursement requires a grade of C or better, or a "pass" in a pass/fail course.

(6) Repayment. An employee who leaves Northgate voluntarily within 12 months after receiving a reimbursement must repay the full amount of that reimbursement. Employees who are laid off do not have to repay.

(7) Questions. Contact the Human Resources office at extension 4410.

Paragraph 3 says that most courses must relate to an employee's job, but GED preparation and English-language classes are approved for any eligible employee. What is the most likely reason for this exception?

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Look at the purpose stated in paragraph 1. How could basic skills connect to that purpose?

Question 8 of 20 · Inferences and conclusions

Birds on the Move

(1) Every winter for more than a century, volunteers across North America have spent a day counting birds. They record every species they see and how many. At first, the counts were simply a holiday tradition. Today, the long record they have built is one of scientists' best tools for seeing how bird populations change over time.

(2) When researchers compared recent counts with those from the 1960s, they noticed a pattern. Many species were being seen farther north in winter than before. The purple finch, for example, now spends the winter much farther north than it did a few decades ago. Not every species moved, and some moved only a little, but the overall direction was clear.

(3) Over the same period, average winter temperatures across much of the continent have risen. Lakes freeze later in the fall and thaw earlier in the spring. Many scientists think the shift in bird ranges is linked to these changes. Birds that once had to fly far south to find unfrozen water or food can now survive the winter in places that used to be too cold.

(4) Some kinds of birds seem to handle change better than others. Birds that eat many different foods, such as seeds, berries, insects, and the offerings at backyard feeders, can often move into a new area and find something to eat. Birds that depend on a single kind of food or habitat have a harder time. A bird that nests only in one type of evergreen forest, for example, cannot move north faster than that forest can grow there, and forests spread very slowly.

(5) Timing is another problem. Many songbirds migrate thousands of miles each spring to raise their young where insects are plentiful. Their migration is triggered mostly by the changing length of the day, which a warming climate does not affect. But in many places, spring warmth now arrives earlier, and insects hatch earlier too. A bird that arrives on its usual date may find that the peak of the insect supply has already passed, leaving less food for its chicks.

(6) Scientists are now using the volunteers' counts, along with newer tools such as tiny tracking devices, to predict which species are most at risk. Some cities and states are also protecting "stepping-stone" habitats, such as patches of forest, wetland, and grassland, so that birds have places to stop and find food as their ranges change.

(7) The birds at your feeder this winter may look the same as always. But the map of where they live is quietly being redrawn.

Which statement best expresses the central idea that the passage suggests but does not state in a single sentence?

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Combine paragraphs 2-3 (what is happening) with paragraphs 4-5 (who has trouble).

Question 9 of 20 · Analyze arguments and use evidence (Trait 1)

Should Linwood Replace Its Grass Ball Fields with Artificial Turf?

Text 1 — Turf Will Keep Our Fields Open (report summary by Dana Whitfield, fictional director of the Linwood Parks Department)

(1) Linwood's three grass ball fields at Millstone Park cannot keep up with demand. I recommend replacing them with artificial turf next spring.

(2) Our department's field logs show that, over the past five years, rain and mud closed the grass fields an average of 61 days per year. During those closures, 38 youth and adult teams had games canceled or moved out of town. Turf fields drain within an hour of a storm, and the manufacturer we are considering rates its surface as playable about 340 days a year.

(3) Turf would also lower our yearly costs. Mowing, watering, fertilizing and reseeding the grass fields cost the department 48,000 dollars last year. The manufacturer estimates that turf maintenance (brushing, cleaning and adding rubber fill) would cost about 12,000 dollars a year.

(4) Installation will cost 1.4 million dollars. However, the state has already awarded Linwood a 900,000 dollar recreation grant that can be used only for field improvements. The remaining 500,000 dollars would come from the parks capital fund, which voters approved in 2022 for this kind of project.

(5) Some residents worry about heat. Turf surfaces do get hotter than grass on sunny days. To address this, the plan includes shade structures for the team benches and a policy, used by many school districts, of checking surface temperature before summer games.

Text 2 — Keep Millstone Park Green (letter to the editor from Rick Paulsen, a Linwood parent)

(6) My daughter played a soccer game on a turf field in another town last July. She came home with red marks on her legs and said the field felt like a frying pan. That tells me everything I need to know about artificial turf.

(7) Everyone knows plastic grass is full of chemicals. Why would we let our kids roll around on it? The parks department says turf is safe, but of course the people selling it would say that.

(8) The cost is also outrageous. Turf has to be replaced after about ten years, and nobody at city hall wants to talk about that bill.

(9) If we cover these fields in plastic today, what is next? Soon the city will pave over every tree in Millstone Park. Linwood has always been a green town, and real families want real grass. Let's keep it that way.

An essay defending the parks director's report must still respond to Text 2's warning that turf "has to be replaced after about ten years." Which approach handles this point most effectively?

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Strong essays admit a fair point and then explain why it does not change the overall judgment.

Question 10 of 20 · Analyze arguments and use evidence (Trait 1)

Should Oak Hollow Ban Gas-Powered Leaf Blowers?

Text 1 — A Ban Would Hurt Working People (op-ed by Tom Brannigan, owner of a fictional Oak Hollow landscaping company)

(1) The town council wants to ban gas-powered leaf blowers starting next year. As someone who has run a landscaping business here for 22 years, I can tell you this ban would be a disaster.

(2) My crew of six depends on gas blowers. Battery blowers are weak toys. I tried one at a trade show, and it barely moved a pile of wet leaves. If the ban passes, we will have two choices: buy equipment that does not work or go back to rakes and triple our prices.

(3) A friend who runs a lawn service in another state told me that half the landscapers in his town went out of business after a similar ban. Is that what the council wants for Oak Hollow?

(4) The people pushing this ban are mostly retirees who have nothing better to do than complain about noise. Hardworking families should not lose their jobs so that a few people can enjoy a quiet morning.

Text 2 — Quieter, Cleaner Yards Are Within Reach (op-ed by Grace Okafor, a fictional public health nurse in Oak Hollow)

(5) Gas-powered leaf blowers create two serious problems: noise and air pollution. A phased ban, with help for local businesses, would solve both.

(6) Last fall, the town's environmental office measured blower noise at 50 feet. Gas models registered 70 to 75 decibels; battery models registered 58 to 65. Because the decibel scale is logarithmic, a 10-decibel drop sounds roughly half as loud to the human ear.

(7) Small gas engines also pollute heavily. The state air-quality board reports that running a commercial gas blower for one hour releases about as much smog-forming pollution as driving a typical car for several hundred miles. Workers who stand next to these engines all day breathe the most exhaust.

(8) Battery equipment has improved. Two Oak Hollow schools switched their grounds crews to battery blowers last year, and the crew supervisor reported that the work took about the same amount of time. Neighboring Ridgeway passed a similar ban in 2021; its business license records show that the number of landscaping companies there grew from 14 to 16 since then.

(9) The proposal gives businesses two years to switch and offers rebates of up to 40 percent on new battery equipment. That is a fair way to protect both workers' health and their livelihoods.

Which evidence from Text 2 most directly challenges Text 1's claim that battery blowers "are weak toys"?

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Hint

The claim is about how well battery blowers do the job. Find evidence about real work done with them.

Question 11 of 20 · Develop and organize ideas (Trait 2)

A Student's Draft Essay on Library Fines

A student wrote this first draft in response to the two texts about ending overdue fines at the Millbrook Public Library. The draft needs revision.

(1) Should libraries charge fines for late books? This question has caused debate in Millbrook. The library director, Rosa Delgado, wants to end fines, but council member Gary Ott wants to keep them. In this essay I will talk about both texts.

(2) Delgado gives specific numbers to back up her claim. She reports that about 6,200 residents have blocked cards, mostly in the two lowest-income neighborhoods. She also points out that fines brought in about 38,000 dollars, less than 1 percent of the library's budget. My cousin once had her library card blocked, and she was really annoyed. These figures show that fines shut out thousands of people while raising very little money.

(3) After Lakeport dropped fines in 2019, 95 percent of items were still returned within a month of the due date. More than 2,000 residents with blocked cards came back to the library. This answers the worry that people will stop returning books. Delgado adds that the library would still bill patrons for books that are never returned.

(4) Lakeport's results suggest the opposite. Ott's argument is weaker. He says fines teach responsibility, but his only support is a memory of paying a quarter as a boy. For example, he claims that without fines "the library will become a free-for-all," yet he offers no evidence for this prediction.

(5) To be fair, Ott makes one reasonable point. The city budget is tight. Therefore, the fine money is small compared with the staff time that fines require, as Delgado explains. Ott's amnesty day would help a little, but it would leave thousands of cards blocked for the rest of the year.

(6) Libraries are important. Everyone should read more books.

Which sentence should replace the last sentence of paragraph 1 ("In this essay I will talk about both texts.") to give the draft a clear thesis?

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Look for the sentence that takes a position on which argument is better supported AND previews the reasons the body paragraphs use.

Question 12 of 20 · Develop and organize ideas (Trait 2)

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A Student's Draft Essay on Bike Lanes

A student wrote this first draft in response to the two texts about protected bike lanes on Riverton's Main Street. The draft needs revision.

(1) Riverton is arguing about bike lanes. Elena Vasquez, a city transportation planner, supports adding protected lanes to Main Street. Hal Dempsey, who owns a hardware store, opposes the plan because it would remove parking. Bike lanes are a topic many people have opinions about.

(2) Vasquez begins with local facts. She cites police crash reports showing 47 crashes involving cyclists or pedestrians on the downtown stretch, including two deaths. She then points to Lakeside, where a state study found that injury crashes fell by 35 percent after protected lanes were added. I rode my bike in Lakeside once, and the lanes were painted green. A state study covering three years is far more reliable than a guess, so her safety claim is strongly supported.

(3) Vasquez notes that the plan removes 40 parking spaces. The city garage one block away is only 55 percent full on average. A survey of 300 shoppers found that 31 percent would bike downtown more often if they felt safe.

(4) Dempsey relies on feelings and secondhand stories. He says one shop owner told him she "would close her shop," but he gives no numbers. As a result, he never explains why a half-empty garage one block away would not work for his customers. He also claims that most people "always will" drive, a prediction with no evidence behind it.

(5) Dempsey does raise one fair point. Customers who buy heavy items need somewhere to load them. Similarly, this problem could be solved with a few loading zones; it is not a reason to reject a plan that would prevent crashes.

(6) In conclusion, bike lanes have good and bad sides. Riverton should think about it.

Paragraph 3 of the draft lists Vasquez's evidence without explaining it. Select all of the sentences that could be added to paragraph 3 to explain how the evidence supports the argument.

Select all that apply.

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An explanation tells what the evidence means for the argument. A sentence that only adds another fact or an opinion does not explain.

Question 13 of 20 · Clarity and command of standard English (Trait 3)

Should Easton Adopt a Teen Curfew?

Text 1 — A Curfew Will Keep Teens Safe (statement by Ray Donnelly, fictional police chief of Easton)

(1) I am asking the Easton town council to adopt a curfew that would require anyone under 17 to be off public streets between 11 p.m. and 5 a.m., unless they are with a parent, working, or traveling to or from a school or religious event.

(2) Juvenile arrests in Easton rose 30 percent last summer, from 20 to 26. Many of these incidents involved groups of teens gathered late at night in Riverside Park.

(3) A curfew gives officers a simple tool. Instead of waiting for trouble, officers could stop and send home young people who should not be out late. When the nearby town of Milford adopted a curfew, its mayor said the streets "felt calmer."

(4) Parents also want help. At a recent community meeting, several parents told me they worry when their teens stay out late.

(5) Nothing good happens on the streets after midnight. A curfew protects young people from becoming victims or getting into trouble.

Text 2 — Curfews Miss the Real Problem (op-ed by Monica Reyes, fictional director of the Easton Youth Center)

(6) Everyone wants Easton's young people to be safe. But a curfew would target the wrong hours and the wrong people.

(7) Our police department's own incident data for the past three years show that 57 percent of juvenile incidents happened between 3 p.m. and 7 p.m. on school days. Only 9 percent happened between 11 p.m. and 5 a.m., the hours the curfew would cover.

(8) Research points the same way. A review that combined the results of a dozen studies of youth curfews in U.S. cities found no consistent drop in juvenile crime or in young people becoming victims of crime after curfews took effect.

(9) A rise from 20 to 26 arrests sounds alarming as a percentage, but six additional arrests in a town of 18,000 people could easily reflect normal ups and downs from year to year.

(10) Easton would do more good by keeping its youth center open until 8 p.m. on school days. Last spring, when we extended our hours for a pilot program, the center served an average of 65 teens each afternoon.

Which sentence from a student's essay integrates a quotation from Text 2 most effectively and correctly?

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Check that the quotation matches the text exactly, that it fits the grammar of the student's sentence, and that the punctuation is correct.

Question 14 of 20 · Clarity and command of standard English (Trait 3)

A Student's Draft Essay on a Teen Curfew

A student wrote this first draft in response to the two texts about a teen curfew in Easton. The draft has errors in style, grammar and sentence structure.

(1) Easton's police chief wants a curfew for teens under 17, but the director of the town's youth center thinks a curfew would target the wrong hours. Both writers want young people to be safe, yet they disagree about how to protect them. Reyes's argument is way more convincing than Donnelly's.

(2) Donnelly's main statistic is a 30 percent rise in juvenile arrests. Which sounds serious. However, the actual numbers were only 20 and 26. Reyes points out that six extra arrests in a town of 18,000 people could just be a normal change, this weakens Donnelly's whole case.

(3) The data on timing are even more important. According to police records, 57 percent of juvenile incidents happens between 3 p.m. and 7 p.m. on school days. Only 9 percent happened during curfew hours. When Reyes compared these numbers with Donnelly's plan, she showed that it would miss most of the problem. In other words, the curfew would cover the hours when the fewest problems occur.

(4) Donnelly also leans on stuff like a mayor's comment that the streets "felt calmer". Feelings are not evidence. Reyes, in contrast, relies on research. Looking at a dozen studies, no consistent drop in juvenile crime was found.

(5) Each of the parents at Donnelly's meeting have a real concern, and I get it. But a curfew isn't the answer. Reyes reports that a spring pilot program at her center drew an average of 65 teens each afternoon. Keeping the youth center open later are a more practical solution.

Which revision of the last sentence of paragraph 4 corrects the error in the original?

Looking at a dozen studies, no consistent drop in juvenile crime was found.

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Who looked at the studies? That person or group must come right after the comma.

Question 15 of 20 · Clarity and command of standard English (Trait 3)

A Student's Draft Essay on a Teen Curfew

A student wrote this first draft in response to the two texts about a teen curfew in Easton. The draft has errors in style, grammar and sentence structure.

(1) Easton's police chief wants a curfew for teens under 17, but the director of the town's youth center thinks a curfew would target the wrong hours. Both writers want young people to be safe, yet they disagree about how to protect them. Reyes's argument is way more convincing than Donnelly's.

(2) Donnelly's main statistic is a 30 percent rise in juvenile arrests. Which sounds serious. However, the actual numbers were only 20 and 26. Reyes points out that six extra arrests in a town of 18,000 people could just be a normal change, this weakens Donnelly's whole case.

(3) The data on timing are even more important. According to police records, 57 percent of juvenile incidents happens between 3 p.m. and 7 p.m. on school days. Only 9 percent happened during curfew hours. When Reyes compared these numbers with Donnelly's plan, she showed that it would miss most of the problem. In other words, the curfew would cover the hours when the fewest problems occur.

(4) Donnelly also leans on stuff like a mayor's comment that the streets "felt calmer". Feelings are not evidence. Reyes, in contrast, relies on research. Looking at a dozen studies, no consistent drop in juvenile crime was found.

(5) Each of the parents at Donnelly's meeting have a real concern, and I get it. But a curfew isn't the answer. Reyes reports that a spring pilot program at her center drew an average of 65 teens each afternoon. Keeping the youth center open later are a more practical solution.

Here are the first two sentences of paragraph 5, with the agreement error already corrected. Which revision best fits the formal, objective style of the essay?

Each of the parents at Donnelly's meeting has a real concern, and I get it. But a curfew isn't the answer.

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Hint

Remove the conversational phrase and the contraction, and keep the student's point.

Question 16 of 20 · Capitalization and punctuation

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Read the letter from a nonprofit organization. Choose the option that correctly completes each blank.

Dear Mr. Ellis,

Thank for donating twenty winter coats to our clothing drive. The coats were delivered to our shelter at last Friday and were handed out the same day.

With gratitude,
Sandra Kim, Director
Harbor Light Family Shelter

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Hint

When you speak directly to someone by name inside a sentence, the name is set off with commas. In an address, which parts are separated by commas?

Question 17 of 20 · Grammar and usage: agreement, pronouns, verb tense, frequently confused words

A company's comparison of two delivery services includes this sentence:

"Of the two services, QuickShip is the most cheapest, but Metro Freight is more faster on long routes."

Which revision uses comparison forms correctly?

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Hint

How many services are being compared? Also, a word should not use both more/most and -er/-est.

Question 18 of 20 · Capitalization and punctuation

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Read the memo from a school district office. Choose the option that correctly completes each blank.

To: All bus drivers
From: Transportation Office
Re: Winter routes

drivers should check the district text alerts before leaving the depot. Most routes will run as usual on icy days. the three hill routes in Pine Ridge may start thirty minutes late.

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Hint

An introductory phrase or a transition word at the start of a sentence is usually followed by a comma.

Question 19 of 20 · Grammar and usage: agreement, pronouns, verb tense, frequently confused words

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Read the summary from a community health fair. Choose the option that correctly completes each blank.

Eastview Health Fair — Summary

Last Saturday, nurses from County General Hospital free blood-pressure checks for more than 150 residents. Because the fair was so popular, the organizers a second fair at the library next April.

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Hint

Look for time words in each sentence: Last Saturday and next April.

Question 20 of 20 · Sentence structure: run-ons, fragments, modifiers, transitions

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Read the notice from a community swimming program. Choose the option that correctly completes each blank.

Lakeside Rec Center — Swim Lessons

the indoor pool is small, each lesson is limited to eight children. Children may not enter the water an instructor is on the deck.

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Hint

Decide how the two ideas in each sentence relate: cause and effect, contrast, time, or condition.