Question 1 of 20 · Sentence structure: run-ons, fragments, modifiers, transitions
Notice: Volunteer Orientation at Harbor City Food Bank
Harbor City Food Bank — Volunteer Orientation
(1) Thank you for signing up to volunteer with Harbor City Food Bank! Every week, our volunteers sort, pack, and deliver food to more than 3,000 families across the county. Before your first shift, you will attend a short orientation session at our warehouse on Pier Road.
(2) Orientation lasts about an hour, it covers safety rules, the sorting process, and the location of emergency exits. Sessions are held every Saturday at 9:00 a.m. and every Wednesday at 6:00 p.m. You do not need to register for a specific session. Simply arrive about ten minutes early and check in at the volunteer desk.
(3) Please dress for physical work. Wear closed-toe shoes and comfortable clothing that you do not mind getting dusty. From November through March, bring a warm jacket. Because the warehouse is unheated in winter. Gloves, hairnets, and safety vests will be provided. Please leave valuables at home, since lockers are not available.
(4) After completing orientation, a shift schedule will be emailed to you. You may choose morning, afternoon, or evening shifts, and you can change your schedule at any time through our online volunteer portal. Most shifts last three hours, and groups of up to ten people can volunteer together.
(5) Volunteers must be at least 14 years old. Volunteers who are 14 to 17 must have a permission form signed by a parent or guardian, and they must work alongside an adult volunteer. Court-ordered community service hours are welcome; please bring your paperwork to orientation so that our staff can sign it.
(6) We look forward to meeting you. Your time and energy make a real difference for neighbors who need help putting food on the table. If you have questions before your orientation, call our volunteer office at 555-0148 or send an email to the address on our website.
In paragraph 4, the notice says: "After completing orientation, a shift schedule will be emailed to you."
Which revision corrects the error in this sentence?
Hint
Who completes orientation? Check whether that person is the subject that comes right after the comma.
Step-by-step solution
Paragraph 4 says: "After completing orientation, a shift schedule will be emailed to you." The opening phrase After completing orientation describes someone who completes orientation. The word right after the comma — the subject — is a shift schedule. A schedule cannot complete orientation, so the phrase has nothing sensible to modify. This is a dangling modifier.
Step by step:
- Ask: who did the action in the opening phrase? The volunteer (you).
- Fix it by naming that person: either make you the subject after the comma, or turn the phrase into a full clause. After you complete orientation, we will email you a shift schedule names you in the opening clause, so the meaning is clear.
- Check the others: adding right away leaves the schedule as the subject; moving the phrase to the end (…emailed to you after completing orientation) still never says who completes it; and After completing orientation by a shift schedule, you will be emailed scrambles the meaning and no longer says what is emailed.
The correct answer is "After you complete orientation, we will email you a shift schedule."
Tip: When a sentence opens with an -ing phrase followed by a comma, the very next noun must be the one doing that action.